My first project as student - Single Family House

[kafka]

Hi all,
I am happy to show you my first project as student done at university...
waiting for your opinion..
:)

[Les Therrien]

very nice.

i like the building shape!

[knurrebusk]

If you present your idea better the next time I´m all for it :)
Just improve colors/light, the construction is the best part.

Perhaps I´m to fast in my thinking!!

Something very nice here I think! just need to sort out the bad colors.
Dont worry! you never spell as bad as me.

Yes!!

I like it very much, but presentation sucks.
Sorry! but you need to match your skills in architecture with presentation.

I´m more busy constructing then drawing, so life is complicated.
Still being pushed can be nice.

[sbrown]

Looks like an interesting design. I would lose the lady getting off the airplane with her bag and the lady standing outside at night under the lights waiting for something. The wrong people in a scene make it unrealistic. You can download RPC creator from archvisions website, then find people in magazines and create your own or use some sort of stylized person. But other than that it looks great. Good work.

[SCShell]

Hey there,
Very nice! Especially for your first Revit project. Can't wait to see what you design after you've been doing it for a while!
Keep it up
Steve

[BWG]

Are the clouds any indication as to what it would be like living there?

[knurrebusk]

I suddenly realise that this is very close to the way I draw!
Just follow your own way.

[Andre Baros]

Interesting images, can you please show us more about the buildings to get a more complete picture... plans, sections, elevations, a short desciption of the assignment.

Looks good so far.

[muttlieb]

I'd like to hear from kafka too, but I'd be surprised if we did. His last post on the forum was June 2nd, 2004...

[beegee]

Busy writing the sequel to The Metamorphosis

[kpaxton]

WOWSERS -

I didn't catch the post date... this had been sitting there since FEBRUARY of last year?? :shock: 2004? Whoa.

Other than that... it's a nice post - nice to see something 'out of the box'. Sure there are some nuances that need to change... Scott - I like the lady with the airline luggage - it suggests she just got home from a long business trip. She's got to be successful to have a house like this !!! :D

Anyone know what has happened to him?

-Kyle

[muttlieb]

WOWSERS -

I didn't catch the post date... this had been sitting there since FEBRUARY of last year?? :shock: 2004? Whoa.
Yeah, that slipped by a lot of people. It makes you wonder why this thread was revived, huh?


Anyone know what has happened to him?
I like beegee's guess...

[kafka]

GULPPP

U did it without me!!!
but now I am back...posting soon a new project!
I hope it will be better presented!

cu

[Arnel Aguel]

GULPPP

U did it without me!!!
but now I am back...posting soon a new project!
I hope it will be better presented!

cuWelcome back ;)